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I threw my thoughts into the valley today,
one coin among so many ripples of light.
I sent with it my wishes on every star,
in the bottom of every fountain,
in the breath of every blown out candle,
and 64 bottles in the ocean.
And then I followed it
dragging my steps
down,
down,
down,
all the while begging for something I wouldn’t know what to do with if I had it.
I want you to understand
that my backbone
is only made of trinkets
I’ve collected-
seashells,
and pretty rocks,
beads
and plastic dinosaurs.
And I don’t know how long its been since I’ve seen to the wear and tear on my skin,
but I’m sure there are more than a few holes that need patching.
I’m having trouble finding a reason to fight to the surface anymore.
Although I want to tell you, I want to tell the world I’m doing fine,
I really wish
I could just pack my things and leave
so I wouldn’t have to keep lying like this.
I threw my thoughts away
so I could have a moment of silence,
so I could remember and mourn what it was like to believe
climbing over the monkey bars
I was a wild thing and running
between
the
swings.
You know, I never really grew up,
and I’m growing
tired of pretending I did.
I really wished
for someone to save me,
but I understand that’s really too much to ask of you
and it's unfair.
I threw my thoughts into the valley
because I’ve done everything else I can think of,
and I know I’m going to collapse from the pressure of sinking
any second,
but maybe, just maybe
someone
could pick them up,
put them in a pocket,
and they could move on without me
among those many rivers of light.
Feel it
Tough Luck
Grip, release, repeat.
As for your poem though, I quite loved it, as well as the title. I think you should keep it ^.^